Task Description: 
We start to line up in our togs and with our day-bags on our back. When we arrive at Point England Beach we put our shoes and day-bags to side. Once we did that then we put on our life jackets. When Mr Somerville starts talking he starts explaining how to control the kayaks and how to steer. After Mr Somerville finishes talking then we start to take off. We can other buddy up or go by ourselves.
We can go around the pole with the green triangle or around that red checkpoint. It is hard for some people to do kayaking but that is why we have Mr Andrews and one the helpers to come rescue us. In case we get stuck they will steer us back to shore.
After the kayaking we sit down on the pristine sand as our feet was touching the light blue water lapping on the sand. Mr Somerville starts to announce people who did so good at kayaking.
Kia ora William, i am very interested with this descriptive writing and i also like the image of the picture what you pick. lastly i scroll down and saw like paragraph about your descriptive writing. Keep it up on your work.
From Mose in LS1 at Panmure bridge school.