Tag: 2024 Writing

Assembly Writing

Task Description: Today we wrote about what happened at assembly.

This morning I arrived late to school. I got to the assembly and sat down with my classmates. When I looked up to the stage Mr Burt, Mr Sommervile, Mr J and Ms Nua. They are in costumes like a soldier, a pharaoh, Ms Incredible and Spiderman. Then Mr Burt announced Team One. It was a nice movie about guessing emotions. It had Mrs Shirley, Ms Dywer , Ms Lal and Ms Squires. But they were guessing the emotion as Bob the Builder, a ballerina, the warriors fan and the clown. The person seeing who is the winner is Ms Hockley. First some tunes were played and the clown said ‘’ happy ‘’. Then some sad tunes played. Bob said ‘’ Sad ‘’ and it was correct. After that some scary tunes happened. The rugby fan said ‘’ Scary music? ‘’ and he was right! After that, the winner was announced. It was Ms Hockly we were all laughing.

After that Ms Hockly said ‘’ Team One will be learning about how to express our emotions’’. Then Team Two’s movie started. It played one of the Moari stories in New Zealand. It showed Tanemauta and his brother the God of birds. They said one of the birds must give their wings to them to save the forest. None of them wanted to save the forest until the brothers got down to the last bird. Kiwi said ‘’ I will save the forest.’’. Then it showed the life of a Kiwi it was a sad story.

Now Team Three were acting on Matilda the Musical. It was based on a scene where the boy had to eat an entire chocolate cake and that boy was Bobby John. The teacher was Mrs Moala and the rest were students. Mrs Moala came out in a tantrum and she said ‘’ WHO ATE MY CHOCOLATE CAKE! ‘’ Then Bobby John came out with a big burp. The mad Mrs Moala said ‘’ If you eat the chocolate cake all will be forgiven’’. Then Mrs Moala left without a word. Then Bobby John got started and was eating bit by bit. Then the rest sang a song saying ‘’ You can do this ‘’. Then Bobby John was full then Mrs Moala emerged from the door suddenly Mrs Moala looked at Bobby John. Next he smudged a big handful of cake onto Mrs Moala’s face. Then it all ended with an assembly full of laughter.

After that it was Team Four’s turn. The Team Four teachers said they will be doing an act about guessing the emotion by body language. First up it was Mrs Sio. I think she was acting like she was happy. Everyone got it right. Ms Tuia I think she acted as if she was mad. EVeryone in the assembly got it right yet again. Ms Tumahai was angry with Ms Parrant being sad. I thought it was kinda easy but still the assembly was surrounded by loud clapping.

Next up is Team Five acting for Cinderella the princess who was Mr Moran. The person telling the tale is Mr WIseman. Whea Saf and Ms Langitupu were the evil sisters and down came Mrs Iloa as the Prince. It starts with Cinderella getting ready for the ball her fairy Godmother gave her a dress and pretty shoes. Then she went and danced with the prince. Then Cinderella ran away. But the prince ripped off the dress. Then the evil sisters tried to trick the prince into thinking that he would fall for them. The evil sisters knew Cinderella left her shoe at the ball. But when they tried to make their evil scheme their heads got cut off. Cinderella didn’t want to marry a head chopper. So she went back to the market and married a fruit seller who was Mr Wiseman. At the end the crowd had gone wild and cheered then it ended with us going and starting school.

Descriptive Camp Writing

Task Description:

We start to line up in our togs and with our day-bags on our back. When we arrive at Point England Beach we put our shoes and day-bags to side. Once we did that then we put on our life jackets. When Mr Somerville starts talking he starts explaining how to control the kayaks and how to steer. After Mr Somerville finishes talking then we start to take off. We can other buddy up or go by ourselves.

 

We can go around the pole with the green triangle or around that red checkpoint. It is hard for some people to do kayaking but that is why we have Mr Andrews and one the helpers to come rescue us. In case we get stuck they will steer us back to shore.  

 

After the kayaking we sit down on the pristine sand as our feet was touching the light blue water lapping on the sand. Mr Somerville starts to announce people who did so good at kayaking.  

 

Descriptive Writing

The picture is a portrait of Tanemahuta also known as Tane for short. Tane is the God of the forest and he is the oldest of his siblings. Tane is a strong God who helped his brothers separate their parents. His parents names are Ranginui and Papatuanuku they are the Gods of the earth and the sky.

 

All the creatures in nature and the trees in the forest listen to Tane. All the birds and the animals seen in the picture  surrounding Tane see him as their protector. He is seen as strong as a mountain. This picture shows Tane brown and muscular body standing  muscular body standing tall and stoic.

Task Description: Today we did a task of Describing Writing about Ranginui and Papatuanuku.

Mauinaina

 There was a bridge as long as a wall.  The cow ran as quick as a flash to the grass so it could eat. On the other side of the bridge was green luscious bushes covering the bridge like fog. In the river was normal pale blue waters but the water was nice and clean to drink. 

 

 There were iron gates as solid as a rock. Also there were network towers as tall as a mountain. There was a normal looking house the moss was covering the house and forests were surrounding the house like the hills and mountains.

My Holiday

In the holidays me and my family went to Tonga so I could visit my Grandpa.

First early in the morning I got tickets at the airport so I could go to Tonga. I was getting so excited to see family members like my Grandpa. 

 

Next me and my family got on the plane with our bags. Then we were served food and drinks  but I was plane sick. Then after the plane landed my Grandpa and Grandma picked me up and dropped me off at my house.

 

Afterwards I did some cleaning with my Mum and played with my friend’s dog. Finally I went to get a drink then me and my family could go to the beach and after I packed my things I went back to New Zealand on the plane.

My favourite part was going to the beach. It made me feel very happy.