Tag: 2022 writing

The Gingerbread House

When I was walking I saw a big ginger bread house. It was so massive. The door was made out of a kit kat. The door handle is made out of candy cane. The door had icing around it. Then I saw the stained glass. It was a fruit line for the glass it was cut into squares. The window had icing around it. The roof had slabs of chocolate on it. The chimney had squares of chocolate. The smoke was cotton candy. The garden had trees. The trees are popcorn. It had statues which are gummy bears. The snow was melted marshmallows. The fence was white chocolate. The path had caramel it was so sticky.

The haunted house

t was so dark a fog moved in I saw lights flickering and shadows in the house. I got a lantern and lighted the way I opened the door. I wondered what was in there. I came in and things were broken and cracked. The house was covered with cobwebs and bones. I came up stairs and saw slender-man he chased me down the stairs I found an axe then I saw my friend we ran from slender and something weird happened. More killers came we fighted  and with the axe and my gun I had. After that we then got C4s and exploded the house then we live happily ever after.

My hoilday

When it was early in the morning it was so cold me and my family packed our luggage for the flight. It was fun. We watched movies, then in three hours we arrived at tongan it was so cool. We went to every single one of my family’s houses in tongan then we had a place to stay. We would stay here for 13 days. We had plenty of fun. We went to the beach and did some things for my grandpa’s funeral. When it was time to go back to NZ we said goodbye to everyone then went home.

For the birds

For the Birds  

 

Group Members: Jordan Emzjull William Kakala, Marven, David.

 

For this activity you will be working collaboratively in a small group with 4-5 other  

Part 1: The Characters Name the birds in the picture on the left.  Then, on the right tell 1-2 things about each character(personality/characteristics) 
Samax The little bird was mean and the rest of the birds were just the same.
Jaxon I am jaxon (the angry bird) 
Max  I am Max (the big bird) I am Kind Clumsy funny
ruby Hello I am ruby and I am thoughtful

 

art 2: The Setting

Where does this story take place? Describe using as much detail as you can.

 The story takes place on the power line. . The power line is gray. The sky is blue and the little birds are sitting on the power line. They are blue. Then a big blue bird came and he came to make friends.. Then the little blue birds were angry so they decided to drop him on the power line. Then when they did they flew up and their feathers came off them and they became naked no feathers on them. The big bird laughed and never stopped. The end.

 

Part 3: The Script

 

As a team, begin writing what you think the character’s are saying.  Remember to write the character’s name first followed by a colon (press shift and the key to the right of the L) before writing the spoken text.                                            

 

Narrator it was a sunny day and the birds were sitting on the    power line

 Samax:(sitting on the power line talking)

Jaxon:(sitting on a power line being angry)

Ruby:(staring at the big bird)

Max: (flew and landed on the power line with the other birds and started waving)

Max: Hello

All The birds:(moving further from the big bird)

Max:(The big bird flew into the center of the little birds and the power line went down)  Why are you guys moving away from me?

All The birds WE DON’T LIKE YOU

Max: ( Turning upside down) 

Samax: (accidentally hit max foot and looks at the other bird next to him jaxon and gave an evil face and starts hitting his toes)

All the other birds: (cheering) Fall off  the line..

Ruby: realizes that it is down to one toe and tells everyone to look and they all flew into the sky and came down with no feathers .