Can He Save Her?
Narrative Writing
WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader’s mind)
This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!
You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?
You will need to write a minimum of 4 paragraphs. I would like some of you to extend yourselves and write at least 6-8 paragraphs.
Fill in the below table to help you plan.
| Planning: | Your Thoughts and Answers: |
| Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story? | Ending for the story. |
| Hero: | Spiderman and Miles Morales. |
| Villain: | Green Goblin and Sandman. |
| Other Characters (if any): | Miles Morales and Sandman |
| Problem: | The Green Goblin along with Sandman are robbing the bank. |
| Solution: | The Spiderman and Miles come out and defeat the Green Goblin. |
| If beginning, what could happen next? | The Sandman has a trick up his sleeve to destroy the heroes. |
| In the end, what happened before this scene? | The Sandman captured Spiderman but Mile swang down and rescued him. |
Start Writing Here:
→ It was dawn in New York and Spiderman ( also known as Spidey) was swinging down the city around the tall high-rise buildings effortlessly. Suddenly a group of police cars skidded down the street heading towards the crime scene. Suddenly Spidey’s spider senses went off and he heard a bank alarm go off in the distance. So the web-crawler leapt into action. When Spidey was at the scene he saw the Green Goblin dragging a sack full of precious treasures and valuables. As the villain was escaping, a police car headed straight towards him. But the Goblin had a dirty trick up his sleeves. As the police car approached the villain threw a pumpkin bomb at the cop. Suddenly the bomb went off leaving the poor cop to get trapped and stuck in a fire. That fire grew large and suddenly there was a loud explosion. Spidey then shot a web in the burning car pulling out the cop to save him from the fiery explosion.
After saving the cop, Spidey swang across the street to catch the villainous Green Goblin. But then suddenly a huge shadow came down on Spidey, it was as if the world had gone darker than dark. Spiderman looked around and saw Sandman, an evil ally of Green Goblin. “ Hello, little spider”. Said Sandman. “ Miles, now! “. yelled Spidey. Suddenly Miles came out of nowhere and kicked Sandman’s arm off, releasing Spidey. When Spiderman was free he shot multiple webs at Green Goblin, catching the villain and making him a soft landing.
While the heroes were capturing Green Goblin, Sandman was making his escape. But when the heroes noticed the escaping they left Green Goblin and swang across the street trying to corner Sandman. When Sandman saw he could not win, he saw a girl and captured her. The heroes quickly went into action and saw the Sandman was with the girl on a building. “One more step and she’s gone,” shouted Sandman. The heroes however didn’t stop, making Sandman drop the girl. Spidey then started to swing as fast as he could so he could catch the girl.
He got to the ground and made a trampoline out of spider-webs, then as the girl fell she had a soft landing. Sandman was furious and ran away to make his escape. “Don’t worry Miles you did good for a kid,”. Spidey spoke awkwardly “Thanks Peter,”. replied Miles. “ We’ll catch Sandman soon,”. The police arrived to put Green Goblin behind bars. After saving the city, the two heroes watched from the skyscrapers of Manhattan staring down at the city.
The End